Dear Homework,
We have lived in our home 52 years and have remodeled three times. I feel the outside needs an update. Hope you can help.Sincerely,
—Recidivist Remodeler
Dear Recidivist Remodeler,
There are aspects of your home that look great (the left side), and parts that seem ill advised (the right side). My guess is that the side I like is original and the one I don’t is part of a more recent remodel. The question, therefore, is: How we can make the left and right sides balance esthetically?
First, the sun porch needs work. I count five different window widths in one element. You will notice from my sketch that I believe you can get by with one width for both French doors and windows, separated by more formal columns. This adds a dignity that is currently lacking.
Next, we need to fix the second-floor bay window. By completely rebuilding it, we can make it mimic the graceful lines and proportions of the one on the left. It no longer strikes a jarring note. Finally, some little details need attention. Please align the front door, skylight and middle window. Make the middle window an octagon to reiterate the gable vent, and let’s simplify the landscaping, which will calm things down even further. To my eyes, all the parts now work together in harmony rather than fight each other for attention.
Hope that helps,
—Homework
Homework is penned by Paul Doerner, founding partner of the Lawrence Group. If you would like your home critiqued, contact us at homework@townandstyle.com.
